The Prodigal Love Song

[Alacrity Stone]

I am earnestly seeking criticism of the theology in this song I have written. You can listen to it and read the lyrics by following this link:

http://www.tangle.com/view_video.php...a7ca3ed27940d4

It is my hope that you will correct me and that I will have a purpose in rewriting the lyrics, in clarrifying the message it contains by the "washing with the water of the word" (paraphrasing Ephesians 5)

Thank you in advance,

Alacrity